Plot

Jill gets another job babysitting. This time it's a pair of kids named John and Mary. The mother, Jennifer, tells Jill she's the third babysitter she hired this month and that she'll be back tonight. Jill sees the children calm and wonders what she meant by that. When she approaches the children, Mary is very ecstatic and John is sad. Mary proposes to play a fairy tale and gives Jill a costume - a tiny purple lingerie with a witch hat. Jill is suspicious of all of this.

Because she's a witch they decide to play Hansel and Gretel. Jill tell them to fatten up on sweets while she leaves to answer her phone. When she comes back she sees John's legs disappear in Mary's mouth. She gets up and tells her she just did what she asked her to do - fatten up. Unfortunately, she's not full yet and now she'll eat Jill. Jill backs away to the wall and realizes she can't escape. Thankfully for her, Mary slips on a remote control and falls. She gets stuck between a cabinet and a sofa, unable to move.Smugly Jill states her eyes are bigger than her stomach and eats her.

Later that night Jennifer comes back with two people inside her stomach. Unsettled by the silence she looks for her children. Suddenly Jill pushes her and Jennifer falls on her stomach. Unable to reach her arms and feet on the floor she's immobilized. Jill tells her she's a lot like her daughter - they both have eyes bigger than the belly and end up betrayed by their own stomachs. Jennifer is quite surprised Mary didn't eat her and fights as Jill swallows her from behind. With a smile on her face, she started patting her belly, enjoying the squirming inside it.

Characters

Jill

Jill is a voracious babysitter who eats children she takes care off.

John

A calm boy who gets eaten by his sister.

Mary

The girl asks Jill to play 'Hansel and Gretel' and gives her a skimpy outfit. She eats her brother and tries to eat Jill, but she's ultimately eaten by the babysitter.

Jennifer

A woman who hires Jill to babysit her children. She's also capable of swallowing people whole and eats two people while she's out. When she comes back she's ambushed and eaten by Jill.

Production

As it was the first story written by PaoGordo, it took one day to complete.

Reception

As of October 2020, the story has more than 5,000 views on Eka's Portal.

Trivia

Goldilocks Jill and the Three Bears is a direct sequel to this story.
Red Riding Hood and the Big Bad Jill is a direct prequel to this story.
Current canon of the work is hard to discern. It's either non-canon or happening after Jill met Samantha in 'Fun in hide n seek'.
There are some differences between comic and the writing. In the comic Jill uses a door to block the girl and in the comic the mother didn't eat anyone.